STAR HardProbes PWG

["Yi Yang" <yiyang429 AT gate.sinica.edu.tw>]

Hi Brennan,

We saw an updated version on drupal now, thanks a lot. 
Let me give you a very quick first round of comments.
 - Title: please add "Supported in part by" above the DOE logo, please check 
other's talk. Also, it would be good to add date of your talk there. 
 - p1: I would start with the previous measurements on cross section vs pT 
and polarization and mention the production mechanism is still an open 
question. Then, introduce these CSM and COM. 
 - p2: Not sure if you need this one, I don't know how you will connect it to 
your results. 
 - p3: Need more description on this page, not sure what you want to say on 
this early predictions. 
 - p4: references are need for this plot. 
 - p5: small b^bar --> small impact parameter 
 - Move p9 p10 (STAR) before p6. 
 - p6: It would be nice to have some parameters showing on the plot, like 
NJ/psi, width, mean...
 - p7: B.EMCal --> BEMC   (2 places) 
 - p8: the quality of the plot is not good, can it be improved? Also, can you 
make the data plots larger? Not easy to know the inserted plot mean, need 
some description. 
 - p9: Add the abbreviations for each subsystem, like (BEMC), (TOF), (TPC), 
(BBC), (VPD)
 - p9: Remove the line under Vertex Position Detector 
 - p10: add eta ranges for TOF and TPC 
 - p11: You have a nice list for systematics sources in your preliminary 
request, I think it would be nice to add here. 
 - p12: Add a title on this page: "Result" 
 - p13: Not sure if you need this plot here, it would be better to have a 
summary, what Barbara sent (PYTHIA predictions) might be useful here. 

Cheers,
Yi

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Yi Yang, Research Fellow
Institute of Physics, Academia Sinica 
E-Mail: yiyang429 AT gate.sinica.edu.tw 
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