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[Barbara Trzeciak <barbara.trzeciak AT gmail.com>]

Dear Katarzyna,

Thank you for the updates.

I sign off.

Cheers,

Barbara

On Mon, Sep 23, 2024 at 8:24 PM Gwiździel Katarzyna (DOKT) <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Dear Barbara,

Thank you for the comments. I implemented all of them.

You can find the updated versions of the poster and the abstract on Drupal.

Best,

Katarzyna 

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Temat: Re: [[Star-hp-l] ] STAR presentation by Daniel Kikola for ESHEP 2024 (CERN school) submitted for review

 

Hi Katarzyna,

Very nice poster. Please find below a few comments.

Invariant mass: 

 - I would add what are the fit functions

Data selection:

- Au+Au √ s NN = 200 GeV -> Au+Au at √ s NN = 200 GeV, 

- since you don't mention VPD anywhere (you also don't have it on the STAR detector's scheme), I would remove the vertex cuts

- n\sigma should be defined, you could do this on the dE/dx plot 

Azimuthal correlations:

- Mark clearly on the plots that these are raw distributions, e.g dN^raw in the y-axis title, or just wirte "uncorrected" on the plots

- You write these are from 2014, I guess it's because you're combining the results from the two runs after corrections. I would suggest making the text in this section a little smaller and then after you show the raw distributions you briefly describe what corrections are applied afterwards

Conclusions:

- in p+p √ s = 500 GeV -> in p+p collisions at √ s = 500 GeV

Abstract:

- L15: I will -> We will (same in L17)

- L17: with the available theoretical model predictions ->  with Monte-Carlo model predictions  (we do not have actuall theory predictions)

Cheers,

Barbara

On Mon, Sep 23, 2024 at 9:17 AM GwiĽdziel Katarzyna (DOKT) <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Dear HP convenors,

Do you agree to push my abstract and poster for ESHEP2024 to star-talks? 

Best regards,

Katarzyna Gwiździel 

Wysłano z programu Outlook dla systemu Android

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From: star-hp-l-request AT lists.bnl.gov <star-hp-l-request AT lists.bnl.gov> on behalf of Yi Yang <yiyang429 AT gate.sinica.edu.tw>
Sent: Friday, September 20, 2024 10:33:59 PM
To: star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
Subject: Re: [[Star-hp-l] ] STAR presentation by Daniel Kikola for ESHEP 2024 (CERN school) submitted for review

 

Hi Katarzyna,

Thanks a lot for the updated version. I don't have any further comments on it. 

Cheers,

Yi

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To:star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov<star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
Date: Fri, 20 Sep 2024 20:58:31
Subject: Re: [[Star-hp-l] ] STAR presentation by Daniel Kikola for ESHEP 2024 (CERN school) submitted for review

Dear Yi, 

I changed the abstract as you suggested. The modified version has been uploaded by Daniel already.

Regards,

Katarzyna

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Sent: Friday, September 20, 2024 4:35:52 AM
To: star-hp-l <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
Subject: Re: [[Star-hp-l] ] STAR presentation by Daniel Kikola for ESHEP 2024 (CERN school) submitted for review

 

Hi Katarzyna and Daniel,

The abstract looks good to me, I only have one minor suggestion for your consideration.
- L6: you don't need "(LHC)".

Cheers,
Yi


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Date:Thu, 19 Sep 2024 01:46:51
Subject:[[Star-hp-l] ] STAR presentation by Daniel Kikola for ESHEP 2024 (CERN school) submitted for review

Dear Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,

Daniel Kikola (daniel.kikola AT pw.edu.pl) has submitted a material for a 
review, please have a look:
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/68966

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