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["Mooney, Isaac" <isaac.mooney AT yale.edu>]

Hi Tanmay,

See below for some comments on your nice abstract.

Thanks,

Isaac

Title: “Observing jet quenching” is a strong statement since we don’t see any effect outside of uncertainties currently.

Same comments from the merged abstract (line numbers refer to the merged draft):

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3. Reword for clarity: "Moments of the jet's transverse momentum, p_{\mathrm{T}}, profile in the \eta - \phi plane relative to the jet axis, called generalized jet angularities, are an important class of ... patterns.”

8. "have been performed using inclusive jets in Pb+Pb collisions..." 

9. "using Au+Au collisions"

10. "complementary to that probed”

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17. This sentence is starting to get into an awkward middle ground between explaining some of the details of the measurements and not doing so. I would either remove this one, or explain in more detail that we can use peripheral collisions as the baseline for no-to-little medium effect on the angularities and compare to central. Or, have a few sentences explaining the salient details of the measurement including centrality, pT, radius, etc (less recommended since the abstract already seems to be a bit on the long side).

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14. I thought we weren’t showing the pp until it’s published because the preliminary had problems. Is the plan to get it published by April?

18. “are differential”

On Oct 28, 2024, at 11:29, Tanmay Pani <tanmay.pani.rutgers AT gmail.com> wrote:

Hi all,

After merging my talk abstract with Ondrej, I am reuploading the abstract for a poster.

Thanks

Tanmay

On Mon, Oct 28, 2024 at 11:28 AM <webmaster AT star.bnl.gov> wrote:

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Tanmay Pani (tp543 AT physics.rutgers.edu) has submitted a material for a 
review, please have a look:
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