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["Mooney, Isaac" <isaac.mooney AT yale.edu>]

Hi Andrew,

Thanks for addressing my comments. I sign off.

-Isaac

On Nov 8, 2024, at 11:04, Andrew Tamis <andrew.tamis AT yale.edu> wrote:

Hi Isaac,

Thank you very much for the comments, I have uploaded a new version

Best,

Andrew

On Thu, Nov 7, 2024 at 4:47 PM Mooney, Isaac <isaac.mooney AT yale.edu> wrote:

Hi Andrew,

See below for some comments on your nice abstract.

Thanks,
Isaac

“observing the transition” -> “with a transition"
“In heavy ions” / “in heavy ion” -> “In heavy-ion collisions”
The last two sentences are a bit clunky together. Maybe “In this talk, we also present the first measurement of charge-weighted energy correlators in heavy-ion collisions which helps to identify modifications to the hadronization process in the presence of the medium."

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