STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Isaac,

Thank you for preparing these nice overview slides.

Please see a few comments from my side. With these implemented I sign 
off.

Slide2: It seems you want to mention “Coalescence” in jet. I would not 
mention as it is now. Because we have not observed yet inside jet 
especially at high pT. It is a low pT phenomenon. I think it should not 
be generalized in this slide. Please free to opine on it.

Slide6: Top cartoon, “Orange triangle” It is not clear what is the 
purpose of this? And what are Rs, RM, RL?

Slide19: first bullet “Bulk is titled…” Please give reference to this 
statement: “S. Chatterjee et al. Phys. Rev. Lett. 120, 192301 (2017) and 
STAR D0: Phys. Rev. Lett. 123, 162301 (2019)”

“v_1” looks like “nu_1” please use different font probably.

3rd bullet “all studied jet R, pT in…” -> I would not mention all pT 
range rather I prefer to mention the range like “pT: 7 -20 GeV/c” 
because, v1 highly pT dependent and we don’t have any measurement above 
20 GeV/c.

Besides, In this slide, you could show dv1/deta vs pT plot.

Slide 29,30: what is “Etc!”? Either you mention what else or remove it.


Best
Nihar







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