Hi John,
I followed your suggestions, and updated the slides.
I suppose I should create a docdb entry for the file? I do not see the talks on the indico though.
Hong.
From:
John Parsons <parsons AT nevis.columbia.edu>
Date: Monday, February 20, 2023 at 6:13 PM
To: Ma, Hong <hma AT bnl.gov>, Andy Haas <andy.haas AT nyu.edu>
Cc: usatlas-hllhc-lartl2l3-l AT lists.bnl.gov <usatlas-hllhc-lartl2l3-l AT lists.bnl.gov>, Tim Andeen <tandeen AT utexas.edu>
Subject: Re: [Usatlas-hllhc-lartl2l3-l] Fwd: DR talk templates
Hi Hong,
I will not have time to update the DOE schedule plot, but anyway I
don't think you need it. The purpose of the talk is to show the DOE
scope is progressing well: the PA/S is in preproduction and is now far
off the Critical Path, and there is good progress on Syst. Integ. which
(as you point out) is on the Critical Path.
I think you can drop some slides:
2, 3, 11, 13, 17, 18
Few other comments:
p. 10 - say something about development and validation of BGA package
p. 12 - I think at the bottom you are trying to say submitting preprod
order is on Critical Path. However, it is now submitted, and the
message should be that PA/S is far from Critical Path
On 2/20/23 1:04 PM, Ma, Hong wrote:
> Hi John,
>
> I am working on this draft:
>
> [?pptx icon] LAr_Breakout_DOE_Scope_V2.pptx<https://brookhavenlab-my.sharepoint.com/:p:/g/personal/hma_bnl_gov/Ec5vAnKuJKRPt6eDb3Lw4hoBbMwo3pjHLmsqQ8Go4tPNKA?e=vQCcgl>
>
> Do you have an updated schedule graph for DOE scope (slide 11 and 13)? I need to update the one we used for DOE CD2/3 review.
> If you see any slides that should not be used, please let me know.
>
> Hao, if you can update the slides on 6.4.4, (slide 9 for technical progress and slide 13&14 for schedule?
>
> Best,
>
> Hong.
>
>
> From: Usatlas-hllhc-lartl2l3-l <usatlas-hllhc-lartl2l3-l-bounces AT lists.bnl.gov> on behalf of Andy Haas <andy.haas AT nyu.edu>
> Date: Monday, February 20, 2023 at 11:52 AM
> To: Parsons, John <parsons AT nevis.columbia.edu>
> Cc: usatlas-hllhc-lartl2l3-l AT lists.bnl.gov <usatlas-hllhc-lartl2l3-l AT lists.bnl.gov>, Tim Andeen <tandeen AT utexas.edu>
> Subject: Re: [Usatlas-hllhc-lartl2l3-l] Fwd: DR talk templates
> My draft is here...
>
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> There's still a bit to do, and i had several questions. I'm skiing right now, but I'm around tonight and tomorrow morning.
>
>
> On Mon, Feb 20, 2023, 11:44 AM John Parsons <parsons AT nevis.columbia.edu<mailto:parsons AT nevis.columbia.edu>> wrote:
>
> I think we can post tomorrow morning (though we might get some heat from
> the PO that we will have to ignore).
>
> On 2/20/23 11:06 AM, Tim Andeen wrote:
>>> how are your slides coming?
>>
>> I’ll have a version ready late this afternoon (5pm my time). Can’t do
>> any earlier though.
>>
>> Do we really want to post today? I was hoping we might be able to
>> iterate at least once and put the talks up tomorrow.
>>
>>
>>
>>
>> On Feb 20, 2023 at 8:29:58 AM, John Parsons <parsons AT nevis.columbia.edu<mailto:parsons AT nevis.columbia.edu>
>> <mailto:parsons AT nevis.columbia.edu<mailto:parsons AT nevis.columbia.edu>>> wrote:
>>>
>>> Tim/Andy, how are your slides coming? And Hong, did you make a "DOE
>>> scope overview" talk?
>>>
>>> On 2/17/23 7:24 AM, John Parsons wrote:
>>>>
>>>> Here again are the L2 and L3 talk templates for the NSF DR.
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> On 2/8/23 2:14 PM, Evans, Harold G. wrote:
>>>>> Hi John and Hong,
>>>>>
>>>>> The templates for the DR talks are posted as google slides at:
>>>>> - L2:
>>>>>
>>>>
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>
>>>>> - L3:
>>>>>
>>>>
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>
>>>>>
>>>>> Cheers - Hal
>>>>>
>>>>> --
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>> ------------------------------------------------------------------------------
>>>>> Hal Evans hgevans AT indiana.edu<mailto:hgevans AT indiana.edu> <mailto:hgevans AT indiana.edu<mailto:hgevans AT indiana.edu>>
>>>> <mailto:hgevans AT indiana.edu<mailto:hgevans AT indiana.edu> <mailto:hgevans AT indiana.edu<mailto:hgevans AT indiana.edu>>>
>>>>>
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>>>
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