sPHENIX EMCal discussion

[David Morrison <dave AT bnl.gov>]

Hi John et al,

I’ve read a fair bit of the pCDR and to respond to your rallying cry of 
“crowdsource!” I’d like to touch up the writing in the magnet chapter.  
Nothing technical and nothing too extensive, but there are typos and clunky 
sentences scattered throughout.

Dave

> On Oct 17, 2015, at 9:00 AM, John Haggerty <haggerty AT bnl.gov> wrote:
> 
> Hello,
> 
> I put version 0.99 of the sPHENIX Pre-Conceptual Design Report on an
> Indico page here:
> 
>> https://indico.bnl.gov/conferenceDisplay.py?confId=1483
> 
> (the pCDR link) which should be accessible to PHENIX and non-PHENIX
> alike.  There is still work going on to complete the document, but the
> hard deadline is to have it complete for the review committee two weeks
> in advance, on Monday, October 26.  PHENIX tradition is a one week
> comment period which will be up next Saturday (October 24), but the
> sooner comments can be received and acted upon by the many authors and
> editors, the better, so if you could make comments and corrections by
> Thursday, that will give us more time to finalize the TeX and clean up
> any figures that still need cleaning up.
> 
> I would like to try crowdsourcing the small grammatical corrections that
> take a lot of time in finalizing a  document like this from many
> authors--if you see small changes in working that are needed, try fixing
> them on the Overleaf site itself:
> 
>> https://www.overleaf.com/2657127qghjbm
> 
> This document has really been a collaborative effort, with writing,
> editing, figures, simulation, and engineering from a large and diverse
> group of people who have come together around this proposal, and it's
> gratifying to see it come together.  It has always impressed me how
> PHENIX comes together to get a job done, and it looks like sPHENIX is
> following that example.
> 
> --
> John Haggerty
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