sPHENIX EMCal discussion

[Ron Belmont <ron.belmont AT colorado.edu>]

Hi Eric,

Looks like a very nice poster.  I have just a few minor comments (in no particular order).

 - In various places there are extra spaces or missing spaces

 - W/SciFi is misspelled as W/SciiFi (extra i)

 - Probably better to abbreviate nanoseconds as ns rather than nSec

 - The bullet for the inner HCal mentions the WLS but the bullet for the outer doesn't, which may confuse people not familiar with the design

 - The legend for the preamp schematic says it's the outer hcal even though the text says it's the same preamp apart from the high gain, so it should probably be rewritten to say it's the schematic for the preamp and with the outer HCal high gain setting

 - For the optical sensors block, it's probably better to say "Some features of the device are:" rather than "The device has:"

Cheers,

Ron

On Thu, Jan 26, 2017 at 7:14 PM, eric mannel <mannel AT bnl.gov> wrote:

An almost final daft of a calorimeter electronics poster for QM-17 can
be found here:
https://www.phenix.bnl.gov/phenix/WWW/p/draft/mannel/Documents/y2017/sPhenix_QM17poster__EJM.pdf

I would like to submit the poster to the BNL media office by EOB Friday,
27-Jan-2017 for printing before i head back to FNAL and test beam
operations.

Comments and suggestions are welcome.

Eric

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