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Re: [Sphenix-hcal-l] QM 2023 poster abstract on HCal cosmic ray muon calibration
- From: Blair Daniel Seidlitz <blair.daniel.seidlitz AT cern.ch>
- To: "sphenix-hcal-l AT lists.bnl.gov" <sphenix-hcal-l AT lists.bnl.gov>, Hanpu Jiang <hj2552 AT columbia.edu>
- Subject: Re: [Sphenix-hcal-l] QM 2023 poster abstract on HCal cosmic ray muon calibration
- Date: Fri, 21 Apr 2023 19:28:30 +0000
Hi Hanpu,
Thanks for this abstract. See some comments below.
General comments
Line numbers would be helpful
L1 : "The sPHENIX experiemnt is comprised of .."
l3/4 "following the Electromagnetic Calorimeter." this leaves it ambigous in my eyes what is the order of the dectors. I would use more precise language.
Paragraph 2 l4: tiles -> scintillator tiles
P3 second last line: remove enhanced
P3 last line: "and contributes broadly to" add broadly.
Best,
Blair
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Subject: [Sphenix-hcal-l] QM 2023 poster abstract on HCal cosmic ray muon calibration
Hi all,
I attached my poster abstract about calibrating the HCal with cosmic ray Muons for this year's QM conference. I appreciate any comments and suggestions.
Sincerely,
Hanpu Jiang
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[Sphenix-hcal-l] QM 2023 poster abstract on HCal cosmic ray muon calibration,
Hanpu Jiang, 04/21/2023
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Re: [Sphenix-hcal-l] QM 2023 poster abstract on HCal cosmic ray muon calibration,
Blair Daniel Seidlitz, 04/21/2023
- Re: [Sphenix-hcal-l] QM 2023 poster abstract on HCal cosmic ray muon calibration, Hanpu Jiang, 04/25/2023
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Re: [Sphenix-hcal-l] QM 2023 poster abstract on HCal cosmic ray muon calibration,
Blair Daniel Seidlitz, 04/21/2023
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