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  • From: Blair Daniel Seidlitz <blair.daniel.seidlitz AT cern.ch>
  • To: "sphenix-hcal-l AT lists.bnl.gov" <sphenix-hcal-l AT lists.bnl.gov>, Hanpu Jiang <hj2552 AT columbia.edu>
  • Subject: Re: [Sphenix-hcal-l] QM 2023 poster abstract on HCal cosmic ray muon calibration
  • Date: Fri, 21 Apr 2023 19:28:30 +0000

Hi Hanpu,

Thanks for this abstract.  See some comments below. 


General comments
Line numbers would be helpful

L1 : "The sPHENIX experiemnt is comprised of .." 
l3/4 "following the Electromagnetic Calorimeter." this leaves it ambigous in my eyes what is the order of the dectors.  I would use more precise language. 
Paragraph 2 l4: tiles -> scintillator tiles
P3 second last line: remove enhanced
P3 last line: "and contributes broadly to" add broadly. 

Best,
Blair

From: sPHENIX-HCal-l <sphenix-hcal-l-bounces AT lists.bnl.gov> on behalf of Hanpu Jiang via sPHENIX-HCal-l <sphenix-hcal-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
Sent: Friday, April 21, 2023 11:22 AM
To: sphenix-hcal-l AT lists.bnl.gov <sphenix-hcal-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
Subject: [Sphenix-hcal-l] QM 2023 poster abstract on HCal cosmic ray muon calibration
 
Hi all,

I attached my poster abstract about calibrating the HCal with cosmic ray Muons for this year's QM conference. I appreciate any comments and suggestions.

Sincerely,
Hanpu Jiang



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