sPHENIX HCal discussion

[Hanpu Jiang <hj2552 AT columbia.edu>]

Dear all,

Here I attach my new version of the abstract. Any suggestions are appreciated!

Sincerely,

Hanpu Jiang

On Fri, Apr 21, 2023 at 3:28 PM Blair Daniel Seidlitz <blair.daniel.seidlitz AT cern.ch> wrote:

Hi Hanpu,

Thanks for this abstract.  See some comments below. 

General comments

Line numbers would be helpful

L1 : "The sPHENIX experiemnt is comprised of .." 

l3/4 "following the Electromagnetic Calorimeter." this leaves it ambigous in my eyes what is the order of the dectors.  I would use more precise language. 

Paragraph 2 l4: tiles -> scintillator tiles

P3 second last line: remove enhanced

P3 last line: "and contributes broadly to" add broadly. 

Best,

Blair

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Subject: [Sphenix-hcal-l] QM 2023 poster abstract on HCal cosmic ray muon calibration

 

Hi all,

I attached my poster abstract about calibrating the HCal with cosmic ray Muons for this year's QM conference. I appreciate any comments and suggestions.

Sincerely,

Hanpu Jiang

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