sPHENIX is a new detector at RHIC.

[Camelia Mironov <camelia.mironov AT cern.ch>]

Dear Jamie, Authors, 
the designated ReadersTeam has finished going through the whole document. 

For the sake of keeping the formatting, I point you to a doc [1], in which 
all comments have been collected. We tried to remove duplicated notes, and 
also separated comments in different categories (which will hopefully help in 
attacking them in an efficient manner). If something is not clear, feel free 
to ping us. 


Best Regards, 
Camelia, Ming, Murad, Peter. 

[1] 
https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://docs.google.com/document/d/1fSy5DeArPmC_1yNaanJCSN9H9OcCzJWGwQ-H--CaswY/edit*__;Iw!!P4SdNyxKAPE!X4NeL7PVhwCY7N1cLHR9nZDWGhAw3xxsCrUoJ-Jr3pgsLOu-loD1Dxul6Iog7lQGbvBOOQ$
 



> On Aug 21, 2020, at 17:13, Jamie Nagle <jamie.nagle AT colorado.edu> wrote:
> 
> Hello sPHENIXians,
> 
> As discussed at the sPHENIX Fortnightly Meeting today, the sPHENIX BUP 
> Taskforce is sending around the draft BUP Document -- it is linked on 
> Indico below.
> 
> https://indico.bnl.gov/event/9236/contributions/40706/attachments/30061/46923/sPHENIX_BUP_2020_draftrelease08212020.pdf
> 
> The document is essentially complete with a few places with red text to 
> indicate that a figure needs updating or a reference is missing.    
> Comments by line number will be most appreciated.   The more constructive 
> and specific the comments (i.e. feel free to suggest specific re-writing or 
> specific figure changes), the better since time is short and we want to 
> produce the best document we can.   There was a lot of good discussion 
> about the option for pp running in Year-1 (2023).    Specific suggestions 
> for how to reference or modify this discussion - currently in Chapter 5 on 
> Commissioning - are most welcome.       
> 
> Deadline for comments is close of business on Tuesday, August 25, 2020.    
> That gives the Taskforce sufficient time to take input seriously and 
> improve the document before the submission deadline of August 31, 2020.
> Comments can be sent directly as responses to this email on the list.   If 
> you want to discuss some points in more detail in person, feel free to 
> reach out to me or any of the Taskforce members
> 
> Sincerely,
> 
> Jamie, for the sPHENIX BUP Taskforce (Sasha Bazilevsky, John Haggerty, Jin 
> Huang, Dennis Perepelitsa, ex-officio Dave Morrison, Gunther Roland)
> 
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