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- From: "Mengel, Tanner Austin" <tmengel AT vols.utk.edu>
- To: Raghav Kunnawalkam Elayavalli <kunnawalkamraghav AT gmail.com>
- Cc: Sphenix L <sphenix-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
- Subject: RE: [[Sphenix-l] ] ICNFP 2024 Slides
- Date: Tue, 27 Aug 2024 16:12:00 +0000
Hi Raghav,
Thank you for the comments on the slides. I have implemented them and uploaded the current version on invenio tmengel_ICNFP_2024_v2.
Best, Tanner
From: Raghav Kunnawalkam Elayavalli <kunnawalkamraghav AT gmail.com>
Hi Tanner,
Thanks for sending an updated version of your slides. They are pretty good overall!
Please find my comments on v1 below - SL 2 - I like this cartoon addition now :) SL 3 - this is where you first notice delta-p_T - maybe you have some definition somewhere on this slide? SL 10 - do you want to add like a one sentence take home for this slide? SL 13 - Im happy to sign off on these new plots. Please remove the red boxes and the requesting approval and reupload the slides. SL 14 - (same as above for this slide) isnt the right plot from ALICE? Maybe write somewhere on the plot that its ALICE SL 15 - id swap the bullets. First point is always what the data looks like. Then you can emphasize the importance of doing an embedding for analyses SL 16 - 'Consistent in shape’ sounds a bit weird…? Maybe rephrase SL 17 - for the sub-bullet maybe we say ‘calorimeter jets’…? SL 22 - this seems like a copy of slide 10
Regarding your note - The figures are all blurry.. could you please fix that? Also could you link the code to GitHub somewhere in this document? There are also some references missing with ‘?’ So please also fix that.
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[[Sphenix-l] ] ICNFP 2024 Slides,
Mengel, Tanner Austin, 08/22/2024
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Re: [[Sphenix-l] ] ICNFP 2024 Slides,
Raghav Kunnawalkam Elayavalli, 08/23/2024
- RE: [[Sphenix-l] ] ICNFP 2024 Slides, Mengel, Tanner Austin, 08/27/2024
- RE: [[Sphenix-l] ] ICNFP 2024 Slides, Mengel, Tanner Austin, 08/27/2024
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- [[Sphenix-l] ] ICNFP 2024 Slides, Stacyann Nelson, 08/26/2024
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Re: [[Sphenix-l] ] ICNFP 2024 Slides,
Raghav Kunnawalkam Elayavalli, 08/23/2024
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