sPHENIX is a new detector at RHIC.

[Raghav Kunnawalkam Elayavalli <kunnawalkamraghav AT gmail.com>]

Hi Tanner,

Thanks for sending an updated version of your slides. They are pretty good overall! 

Please find my comments on v1 below - 

SL 2 - I like this cartoon addition now :) 

SL 3 - this is where you first notice delta-p_T - maybe you have some definition somewhere on this slide? 

SL 10 - do you want to add like a one sentence take home for this slide? 

SL 13 - Im happy to sign off on these new plots. Please remove the red boxes and the requesting approval and reupload the slides. 

SL 14 - (same as above for this slide) isnt the right plot from ALICE? Maybe write somewhere on the plot that its ALICE

SL 15 - id swap the bullets. First point is always what the data looks like. Then you can emphasize the importance of doing an embedding for analyses 

SL 16 - 'Consistent in shape’ sounds a bit weird…? Maybe rephrase 

SL 17 - for the sub-bullet maybe we say ‘calorimeter jets’…? 

SL 22 - this seems like a copy of slide 10

Regarding your note - 

The figures are all blurry.. could you please fix that? 

Also could you link the code to GitHub somewhere in this document? There are also some references missing with ‘?’ So please also fix that. 

Cheers
Raghav 


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On Aug 22, 2024, at 3:40 PM, Mengel, Tanner Austin (via sphenix-l Mailing List) <sphenix-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hi Everyone,

 

I’ve uploaded my slides for my upcoming talk on underlying event characterization and jets at sPHENIX for ICNFP 2024. You can access the slides via this invenio link.  There are a few simulation plots in the slides that I'd like to get approved. I've already run them by the Jet TG and posted a note describing how they were created, which you can find here.  If you aren’t an invenio aficionado,  all the relevant information is also available on yesterday's Jet TG meeting Indico:https://indico.bnl.gov/event/24599/#3-practice-talk-for-ppg04.

 

I’d appreciate any comments or suggestions! Feel free to email me if you prefer not to use the invenio request.

 

Thanks,

Tanner Mengel

 

Graduate Research Assistant

University of Tennesse, Knoxville

Email: tmengel AT vols.utk.edu

Mobile: (214)-534-8158

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