sPHENIX MAPS tracker discussion

[Ming Liu <ming AT bnl.gov>]

Hi Austin,

A nice poster! Two additional suggestions to consider:

1. Figure 1, the mechanical sideview is from very old design, you can get the final design from here, pages 8, 9, 10

https://www.phenix.bnl.gov/WWW/publish/mxliu/sPHENIX/GenMeetings/2019/MVTX-Overview-Collaboration-Mtg-11012019-v2.pptx  

 

2. Your presentaiton will be online, right? To show them clearly on the computer screen, you may want to increase the text font size, well that also means you may need to reduce the text ..

 

Cheers,

Ming

 

 

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From: sPHENIX-MAPS-l <sphenix-maps-l-bounces AT lists.bnl.gov> on behalf of SPHENIX MVTX <sphenix-maps-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
Reply-To: Yasser Corrales Morales <ycorrale AT cern.ch>
Date: Friday, June 4, 2021 at 3:17 PM
To: SPHENIX MVTX <sphenix-maps-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
Subject: Re: [Sphenix-maps-l] RHIC/AGS Meeting MVTX Poster

 

Hi Austin,

The poster looks very nice. Please find below some suggestion:

General comments:

 - Add a space between colon (:) and caption in the Figures. e. g., Figure 1:Cutaway view ... -> Figure 1: Cutaway view ...

- I would add Figure or Fig. when referring a figure instead just the number,  [4] -> [Fig. 4]

Fig. 3:

 the point end of internal RU (black) arrows in the VTRx are opposite to the signal highlighted out the dash line box. The bottom arrow is input and top is output.

the control signal is bidirectional, but it  uses both VTRx  fibers.

 

Fig. 6 and 7:

- use same color notation for arrows on both figures. During short loopback test do we check the orange fiber path in Fig 7?

Conclusion:

- last bullet point to a wrong figure....

Cheers,

Yasser.

 

 

 

On 6/4/21 13:31, Schmier, Austin via sPHENIX-MAPS-l wrote:

Hi all,

 

I am presenting this poster at the upcoming user meeting. Please let me know if you have any comments or corrections you would like me to make before the meeting.

 

Best regards,

Austin Schmier

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