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Re: [Sphenix-physics-l] [Sphenix-hf-jets-l] [ISMD 2023] First Draft for My Talk at ISMD 2023 Conference
- From: "Huang, Jin" <jhuang AT bnl.gov>
- To: "Shi, Zhaozhong" <zhaozhongshi AT lanl.gov>, Cameron Thomas Dean <cameron.dean AT cern.ch>, marziarosati <marziarosati AT gmail.com>
- Cc: "sphenix-hf-Jets-l AT lists.bnl.gov" <sphenix-hf-Jets-l AT lists.bnl.gov>, "sphenix-maps-l-bounces AT lists.bnl.gov" <sphenix-maps-l-bounces AT lists.bnl.gov>, "sphenix-physics-l AT lists.bnl.gov" <sphenix-physics-l AT lists.bnl.gov>, "Liu, Ming Xiong" <mliu AT lanl.gov>
- Subject: Re: [Sphenix-physics-l] [Sphenix-hf-jets-l] [ISMD 2023] First Draft for My Talk at ISMD 2023 Conference
- Date: Sun, 20 Aug 2023 14:31:23 +0000
Dear Zhaozhong
Thanks for updating the slides. Please find further suggestions on the current version below:
Cheers
Jin
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From: Shi, Zhaozhong <zhaozhongshi AT lanl.gov>
Dear Cameron and Marzia,
I have taken the comments from the rehearsal and updated my ISMD 2023 slides. I posted my new slides on Invenio. You can find them below:
Could you please have a look? Any more comments or suggestions are welcome and appreciated. Thank you very much!
Sincerely, Zhaozhong Shi
Zhaozhong Shi, PhD Director's Postdoctoral Fellow P-3: Nuclear and Particle Physics and Application Los Alamos National Laboratory TA-53 Building 1 A106 Los Alamos, New Mexico 87545
From: Shi, Zhaozhong <zhaozhongshi AT lanl.gov>
Dear Cameron,
I have produced a new draft for my ISMD 2023 talk after applying all your comments. Please see the link below for my updated slides:
Thank you very much!
Sincerely, Zhaozhong Shi From: Cameron Thomas Dean <cameron.dean AT cern.ch>
Hi Zhaozhong,
Thanks for your slides, they’re looking good. I have some comments and suggestions:
In general, you likely have too many slides for a 12+3 talk. My general thought it 1 minute per slide but slide 2 is your general overview of sPHENIX so you’ll likely spend 3 minutes on that slide alone discussing the detectors, run plans, DAQ etc. With 16 slides, you may end up rushing over the physics slides which should be the focus of the talk. My thoughts would be to trim out slide 4 (as you’ll probably say this in the overview slide). I would combine slides 5 and 6, and (sorry calorimeters and jet enthusiasts) I would cut slides 8 and 9. This would get you 12 slides and allow you to really drive home the physics for us.
Slide 2: I would change the phrasing of 2015 NSAC Long Range Plan. The conference is in Europe so there’s likely a large portion of the audience who don’t understand what it means. You could say something like “Highest priority of US long term science agenda” or “DOE flagship HI experiment” or something like that.
Also on this slide, your last bullet point should be rephrased as we sadly ended run 23. You could say first collisions have ended and we’re currently commissioning. I’m sure there are people in the audience that know RHIC has stopped for the year. You mention in your summary slide that the run is ongoing as well.
Slide 5: You should swap the plots with the approved preliminary ones from Invenio, https://sphenix-invenio.sdcc.bnl.gov/communities/sphenixcommunity/requests/d35b771c-775e-43b2-99a0-04bbe3ac17e6
Slide 6: I would be careful or even remove the last point. We won’t have collision data with the full of sPHENIX until next year.
Slide 7: The event display is good and we’ll replace it with the approved version. Just a note in case of questions, the point in the MVTX that is not part of the cosmic track is a noisy pixel.
Slide 9: If you keep this, I’ve seen people in the audience before ask what the conversion of ADC to GeV is (it should be pretty obvious by using the PDG mass of the pi0), maybe ask an EMCal expert about the value
Slide 20: I would remove this, I don’t think we can resolve the cluster sizes by Friday in the cosmic runs.
I’ll be in BNL tomorrow and can come by 1008 if you want to talk about anything.
Cheers, Cameron
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Re: [Sphenix-physics-l] [Sphenix-hf-jets-l] [ISMD 2023] First Draft for My Talk at ISMD 2023 Conference,
Cameron Thomas Dean, 08/15/2023
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Shi, Zhaozhong, 08/17/2023
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Re: [Sphenix-physics-l] [Sphenix-hf-jets-l] [ISMD 2023] First Draft for My Talk at ISMD 2023 Conference,
Shi, Zhaozhong, 08/19/2023
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Re: [Sphenix-physics-l] [Sphenix-hf-jets-l] [ISMD 2023] First Draft for My Talk at ISMD 2023 Conference,
Huang, Jin, 08/20/2023
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Re: [Sphenix-physics-l] [Sphenix-hf-jets-l] [ISMD 2023] First Draft for My Talk at ISMD 2023 Conference,
Shi, Zhaozhong, 08/20/2023
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Re: [Sphenix-physics-l] [Sphenix-hf-jets-l] [ISMD 2023] First Draft for My Talk at ISMD 2023 Conference,
Huang, Jin, 08/20/2023
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Re: [Sphenix-physics-l] [Sphenix-hf-jets-l] [ISMD 2023] First Draft for My Talk at ISMD 2023 Conference,
Huang, Jin, 08/20/2023
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Re: [Sphenix-physics-l] [Sphenix-hf-jets-l] [ISMD 2023] First Draft for My Talk at ISMD 2023 Conference,
Shi, Zhaozhong, 08/20/2023
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Re: [Sphenix-physics-l] [Sphenix-hf-jets-l] [ISMD 2023] First Draft for My Talk at ISMD 2023 Conference,
Huang, Jin, 08/20/2023
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Re: [Sphenix-physics-l] [Sphenix-hf-jets-l] [ISMD 2023] First Draft for My Talk at ISMD 2023 Conference,
Shi, Zhaozhong, 08/19/2023
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Re: [Sphenix-physics-l] [Sphenix-hf-jets-l] [ISMD 2023] First Draft for My Talk at ISMD 2023 Conference,
Shi, Zhaozhong, 08/17/2023
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