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["Osborn, Joseph" <josborn1 AT bnl.gov>]

Hi Adeeb,

Here are a few comments on your slides. Enjoy DNP!

Joe

pg 7 - reconstruction of full tracks -> reconstruction of TPC tracks

pg 13 - I would remove "evenly populated" and "reflects uniform TPC performance" as there are no efficiency corrections to this plot, therefore there are clear non-uniformities.

Also on this slide, looking back at your slides from this morning I can see that this is the same data but I'm guessing because the binning/y axis range changed there is now a single empty bin smack in the middle of the plot. Can you increase the number of bins to make this go away, as it just looks a little strange having a single white empty bin right in the middle?

pg 14 - well-constructed -> well-reconstructed

pg 22 - The run page you list will not be accessible to anyone outside of the collaboration - did you mean to cite the public page that is www.sphenix.bnl.gov? I would also cite the published paper if you are going to reference it, rather than the arXiv link.

General comments -

Did you consider adding a conclusion slide?

Have you practiced your talk to ensure you are within the 12 minute time? You have quite a lot of slides for a 12 minute talk, but maybe you intend to go through each slide quickly.

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Joe Osborn, Ph.D

Physics Department

Brookhaven National Laboratory

josborn1 AT bnl.gov

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Subject: [[Sphenix-tracking-l] ] DNP Slides (Final Draft) Adeeb Saed

 

Hi everyone,

Thank you very much for the feedback I received today on my slides and plots for the DNP. Your advice was invaluable. I am looking for "work-in-progress" approval on my plots. Please provide any additional comments on my material.

Here is the latest version of my presentation:

https://sphenix-invenio.sdcc.bnl.gov/records/nvxrg-9v688?token=eyJhbGciOiJIUzUxMiJ9.eyJpZCI6ImMwMGY1YzRlLTg2MzAtNGQwMS05YTM5LTM5OTg0NWJkYjc2NiIsImRhdGEiOnt9LCJyYW5kb20iOiI0MTQ3YzUyMGI4NmYzNWJhNjZmNWI1MDgyZDI1NDM5NiJ9.iBlV4r3i2jerclxse1xMBH0PSGPKCekzJgkP8XK0iDYbo4IDwbxLexEkTcr_BxKhd5BymT8lBjNidStCJLQ2ng

Thank you and I look forward to hearing from you!

Adeeb