STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk <hanna.zbroszczyk AT pw.edu.pl>]

Dear Ashish,

With those implemented I sign-off.

Best regards,

Hanna

Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk

PhD DSc Eng, Professor WUT

E-mail: hanna.zbroszczyk AT pw.edu.pl

Tel: +48 22 234 5851 (office)

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Dear Hanna,

Many thanks for the suggestions and comments. I have incorporated them and can be found on the link below.

https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/DAE_HEP_abstract_e2.pdf

I have slightly rephrased the sentence
"The cumulants and their ratios are related to the correlation length of the system and the susceptibilities that are also calculable in various QCD-based models." -> The cumulants and their ratios are related to the correlation length of the system and susceptibilities. The susceptibilities are calculable in various QCD-based models and lattice QCD.

Please let me know if there are any further suggestions.

Best regards,
Ashish


On 2020-09-21 13:29, Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk via Star-cf-l wrote:

Hi Asish,
I agree with Xiaofeng that net-proton results need more investigation
and should not be presented during this talk. Except this, I have
found few minor parts to be improved:
nature of quark-hadron phase transition and freeze-out dynamics ->
nature of quark-hadron phase transition, and freeze-out dynamics
The cumulants and their ratios are related to the correlation length
of the system and the susceptibilities that are also calculable in
various QCD-based models. -> The cumulants and their ratios related to
the system's correlation length and the susceptibilities are also
calculable in various QCD-based models.
the STAR detector at RHIC in the year 2018.-> the STAR detector at
RHIC in 2018.
Cumulants and ratios of cumulants of net-proton, net-kaon and
net-charge distributions -> Cumulants and ratios of cumulants of
net-kaon, and net-charge distributions.
Thank you,
With my best regards,
Hanna
Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk
PhD DSc Eng, Professor WUT
E-mail: hanna.zbroszczyk AT pw.edu.pl
Tel: +48 22 234 5851 (office)
Address:
Warsaw University of Technology
Faculty of Physics
Nuclear Physics Division
Koszykowa 75
Office: 117b (via 115)
00-662 Warsaw, Poland

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