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Hanna Zbroszczyk ( hanna.zbroszczyk AT pw.edu.pl ) has commented on a material  
originally submitted by Yevheniia Khyzhniak ( eugenia.sh.el AT gmail.com ) at
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/icppa-2020/pion-femtoscopy-pau-and-dau-collisions-sqrtsnn-200-gev-star-experiment-1

Comment:
l. 7 Add comma after collisions;  particle- emitting -> a particle emitting
l. 9 remove comma, femtoscopy -> the femtoscopy, allows -> allows one
l. 12 transverse -> the transverse
l. 15 collision -> the collision
l. 18 allows -> allows one
l. 19 emitting ->the emitting
l. 20 add comma after Coulomb; spatiotemporal -> spatio-temporal
l. 22 is ->are
l. 23 initial-> the initial
l. 29 femtoscopy method created -> was created
Correct the formula for Qinv, take into account also energies E1 and E2
l. 40 utilizes -> uses
l. 55 define SL and FMR
l. 62 add space between GeV and for and the same for description of the Fig.1
l. 65 momentum-> the momentum
l. 68 Add comma after Also; correlation -> the correlation
l. 69 add comma before which
l. 70 weak -> a weak
l. 71 Add comma after also
l. 75 add comma after cases
l. 78 Add comma after Next

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