STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk <hanna.zbroszczyk AT pw.edu.pl>]

Dear Eugenia,

Please fine below my comments to your nice proceedings:

l. 7 Add comma after collisions;  particle- emitting -> a particle emitting

l. 9 remove comma, femtoscopy -> the femtoscopy, allows -> allows one 

l. 12 transverse -> the transverse

l. 15 collision -> the collision

l. 18 allows -> allows one

l. 19 emitting ->the emitting

l. 20 add comma after Coulomb; spatiotemporal -> spatio-temporal

l. 22 is ->are

l. 23 initial-> the initial

l. 29 femtoscopy method created -> was created

Correct the formula for Qinv, take into account also energies E1 and E2 

l. 40 utilizes -> uses

l. 55 define SL and FMR

l. 62 add space between GeV and for and the same for description of the Fig.1 

l. 65 momentum-> the momentum

l. 68 Add comma after Also; correlation -> the correlation

l. 69 add comma before which

l. 70 weak -> a weak

l. 71 Add comma after also

l. 75 add comma after cases

l. 78 Add comma after Next

Thanks,

Hanna

Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk

PhD DSc Eng, Professor WUT

E-mail: hanna.zbroszczyk AT pw.edu.pl

Tel: +48 22 234 5851 (office)

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Nuclear Physics Division

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Office: 117b (via 115)

00-662 Warsaw, Poland

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