STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[Xiaofeng Luo <xfluo.star AT hotmail.com>]

    Dear Eugenia,
      
          Nice proceedings. 
          Please find my comments/suggestions below : 
      
          1. Line 80,  seen seen -> seen 
          2. Line 85, In most of the cases, statistical uncertainties
      are smaller than the marker size. It
       is seen from the Fig. 2, that, for almost all cases, statistical
      uncertainties are smaller than the
       marker size. -> It is
        seen from the Fig. 2, that, for almost all cases, statistical
        uncertainties are smaller than the
         marker size.
        
          3. Line 104, became -> become 
        
            With those implemented, I sign off. 
        
      Thank you, 
      Best Regards,
      Xiaofeng

On 2020/10/9 20:45, Eugenia Khyzhniak via Star-cf-l wrote:

Dear Hanna,

I've upload again to https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/52250

Here is the direct link: https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/KhyzhniakIcppa2020_2.pdf

Best regards,

Eugenia

пт, 9 окт. 2020 г. в 15:25, Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk <hanna.zbroszczyk AT pw.edu.pl>:

Dear Eugenia,

I don’t know what happened but proceedings I see under the link:

https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/52250

Is still previous version I think. Please make sure you have uploaded the final version.

Thanks,

Hanna

Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk

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Dear Hanna,

Thank you!

I've updated my proceeding.

Best regards,

Eugenia

чт, 8 окт. 2020 г. в 21:34, Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk <hanna.zbroszczyk AT pw.edu.pl>:

Dear Eugenia,

Line 30: correct the formula for Qinv, correct one is: Qinv = \sqrt{ (p_1 - p_2)^2 - (E_1 - E_2)^2 }

p_{1,2} -> p_1, p_2; E_{1,2} -> E_1, E_2

Line 74: lines represents -> line represent

With those implemented I sign off.

Thanks,

Hanna

Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk

PhD DSc Eng, Professor WUT

E-mail: hanna.zbroszczyk AT pw.edu.pl

Tel: +48 22 234 5851 (office)

Address:

Warsaw University of Technology

Faculty of Physics

Nuclear Physics Division

Koszykowa 75

Office: 117b (via 115)

00-662 Warsaw, Poland

Wiadomość napisana przez Eugenia Khyzhniak <eugenia.sh.el AT gmail.com> w dniu 08.10.2020, o godz. 18:24:

Dear Hanna,

I've updated my proceeding.

Best wishes,

Eugenia

чт, 8 окт. 2020 г. в 01:33, Eugenia Khyzhniak <eugenia.sh.el AT gmail.com>:

Dear Hanna,

Thank you for your comments!

I've implemented all your comments and updated my proceeding.

Best regards,

Eugenia

ср, 7 окт. 2020 г. в 12:57, Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk via Star-cf-l <star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov>:

Dear Eugenia,

Please fine below my comments to your nice proceedings:

l. 7 Add comma after collisions;  particle- emitting -> a particle emitting

l. 9 remove comma, femtoscopy -> the femtoscopy, allows -> allows one 

l. 12 transverse -> the transverse

l. 15 collision -> the collision

l. 18 allows -> allows one

l. 19 emitting ->the emitting

l. 20 add comma after Coulomb; spatiotemporal -> spatio-temporal

l. 22 is ->are

l. 23 initial-> the initial

l. 29 femtoscopy method created -> was created

Correct the formula for Qinv, take into account also energies E1 and E2 

l. 40 utilizes -> uses l. 55 define SL and FMR l. 62 add space between GeV and for and the same for description of the Fig.1  l. 65 momentum-> the momentum l. 68 Add comma after Also; correlation -> the correlation l. 69 add comma before which l. 70 weak -> a weak l. 71 Add comma after also l. 75 add comma after cases l. 78 Add comma after Next

Thanks,

Hanna

Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk

PhD DSc Eng, Professor WUT

E-mail: hanna.zbroszczyk AT pw.edu.pl

Tel: +48 22 234 5851 (office)

Address:

Warsaw University of Technology

Faculty of Physics

Nuclear Physics Division

Koszykowa 75

Office: 117b (via 115)

00-662 Warsaw, Poland

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