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Re: [Star-cf-l] STAR presentation by Yevheniia Khyzhniak for ICPPA-2020 submitted for review

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  • From: Eugenia Khyzhniak <eugenia.sh.el AT gmail.com>
  • To: Xiaofeng Luo <xfluo.star AT hotmail.com>
  • Cc: STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG <star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
  • Subject: Re: [Star-cf-l] STAR presentation by Yevheniia Khyzhniak for ICPPA-2020 submitted for review
  • Date: Sat, 10 Oct 2020 08:49:00 +0300
Dear Xiaofeng,

Thank you for the comments.
Here is the updated version: https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/KhyzhniakIcppa2020_6.pdf

Thank you,
Eugenia

сб, 10 окт. 2020 г. в 07:46, Xiaofeng Luo <xfluo.star AT hotmail.com>:
Dear Eugenia,

    Nice proceedings.
    Please find my comments/suggestions below :

    1. Line 80,  seen seen -> seen
    2. Line 85, In most of the cases, statistical uncertainties are smaller than the marker size. It
 is seen from the Fig. 2, that, for almost all cases, statistical uncertainties are smaller than the
 marker size. -> It is seen from the Fig. 2, that, for almost all cases, statistical uncertainties are smaller than the
 marker size.

  3. Line 104, became -> become

    With those implemented, I sign off.

Thank you,
Best Regards,
Xiaofeng

On 2020/10/9 20:45, Eugenia Khyzhniak via Star-cf-l wrote:
Dear Hanna,


Best regards,
Eugenia

пт, 9 окт. 2020 г. в 15:25, Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk <hanna.zbroszczyk AT pw.edu.pl>:
Dear Eugenia,

I don’t know what happened but proceedings I see under the link:


Is still previous version I think. Please make sure you have uploaded the final version.

Thanks,
Hanna

Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk
PhD DSc Eng, Professor WUT

Tel: +48 22 234 5851 (office)

Address:
Warsaw University of Technology
Faculty of Physics
Nuclear Physics Division
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Office: 117b (via 115)
00-662 Warsaw, Poland


Wiadomość napisana przez Eugenia Khyzhniak <eugenia.sh.el AT gmail.com> w dniu 08.10.2020, o godz. 20:52:

Dear Hanna,
Thank you!
I've updated my proceeding.
Best regards,
Eugenia

чт, 8 окт. 2020 г. в 21:34, Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk <hanna.zbroszczyk AT pw.edu.pl>:
Dear Eugenia,

Line 30: correct the formula for Qinv, correct one is: Qinv = \sqrt{ (p_1 - p_2)^2 - (E_1 - E_2)^2 }
p_{1,2} -> p_1, p_2; E_{1,2} -> E_1, E_2

Line 74: lines represents -> line represent

With those implemented I sign off.

Thanks,
Hanna

Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk
PhD DSc Eng, Professor WUT

Tel: +48 22 234 5851 (office)

Address:
Warsaw University of Technology
Faculty of Physics
Nuclear Physics Division
Koszykowa 75
Office: 117b (via 115)
00-662 Warsaw, Poland


Wiadomość napisana przez Eugenia Khyzhniak <eugenia.sh.el AT gmail.com> w dniu 08.10.2020, o godz. 18:24:

Dear Hanna,
I've updated my proceeding.
Best wishes,
Eugenia

чт, 8 окт. 2020 г. в 01:33, Eugenia Khyzhniak <eugenia.sh.el AT gmail.com>:
Dear Hanna,
Thank you for your comments!
I've implemented all your comments and updated my proceeding.
Best regards,
Eugenia

ср, 7 окт. 2020 г. в 12:57, Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk via Star-cf-l <star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov>:
Dear Eugenia,

Please fine below my comments to your nice proceedings:

l. 7 Add comma after collisions;  particle- emitting -> a particle emitting
l. 9 remove comma, femtoscopy -> the femtoscopy, allows -> allows one 
l. 12 transverse -> the transverse
l. 15 collision -> the collision
l. 18 allows -> allows one
l. 19 emitting ->the emitting
l. 20 add comma after Coulomb; spatiotemporal -> spatio-temporal
l. 22 is ->are
l. 23 initial-> the initial
l. 29 femtoscopy method created -> was created
Correct the formula for Qinv, take into account also energies E1 and E2 
l. 40 utilizes -> uses
l. 55 define SL and FMR
l. 62 add space between GeV and for and the same for description of the Fig.1 
l. 65 momentum-> the momentum
l. 68 Add comma after Also; correlation -> the correlation
l. 69 add comma before which
l. 70 weak -> a weak
l. 71 Add comma after also
l. 75 add comma after cases
l. 78 Add comma after Next

Thanks,
Hanna

Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk
PhD DSc Eng, Professor WUT

Tel: +48 22 234 5851 (office)

Address:
Warsaw University of Technology
Faculty of Physics
Nuclear Physics Division
Koszykowa 75
Office: 117b (via 115)
00-662 Warsaw, Poland















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