STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[Xiaofeng Luo <xfluo.star AT hotmail.com>]

Hi Jin,

    Nice abstract.
    Please find my comments and suggestions below :

    Line 3, a intermittency -> an intermittency.

    Line 9 ： -> Similar measurements have been carried out by NA49 and 
NA61 experiment in heavy-ion collisions
                        with different system sizes.

    Line 11-12 : ->The sentences may be re-written as :
                             In this talk, we will present the scaled 
factorial moments (Fq(M), up to sixth order) of charged particles in 
Au+Au collisions at
                              s_nn=7.7 - 200 GeV measured by STAR 
experiment in the first phase of RHIC BES.
                              Then, we will show the energy and 
centrality dependence of extracted \nu values.


    With those implemented, I sign off.

Thank you,
Best Regards,
Xiaofeng

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