STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

["JinWu" <wj2016113394 AT mails.ccnu.edu.cn>]

Hi Xiaofeng,

Thank you very much for your  nice comments.  I have updated the abstract  with your comments implemented.  Please find it at the same link:  https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/53478 .

Best regards,

Jin 

 

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From:  "Xiaofeng Luo via Star-cf-l"<star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov>;

Date:  Sat, Jan 30, 2021 01:33 PM

To:  "STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG"<star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov>;

Subject:  Re: [Star-cf-l] STAR presentation by Jin Wu for CPOD March Meeting 2021 submitted for review

 

Hi Jin,

     Nice abstract.
     Please find my comments and suggestions below :

     Line 3, a intermittency -> an intermittency.

     Line 9 ： -> Similar measurements have been carried out by NA49 and
NA61 experiment in heavy-ion collisions
                         with different system sizes.

     Line 11-12 : ->The sentences may be re-written as :
                              In this talk, we will present the scaled
factorial moments (Fq(M), up to sixth order) of charged particles in
Au+Au collisions at
                               s_nn=7.7 - 200 GeV measured by STAR
experiment in the first phase of RHIC BES.
                               Then, we will show the energy and
centrality dependence of extracted \nu values.


     With those implemented, I sign off.

Thank you,
Best Regards,
Xiaofeng

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