STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[Xiaofeng Luo <xfluo.star AT hotmail.com>]

Hi Ashish,

    Nice Presentation.
    Please find my comments/suggestions below :

    1. Slide 3,  please enlarge the data figure and also add long paper 
reference : arXiv : 2101.12413
        The statement “C2, C3 and C4 : positive for data and model”  We 
may specific energy range 7.7~ 200 GeV.
        We know that 3 GeV C4 is negative.

    2. Slide 5, It would be better to definite the correlation function 
and/or factorial cumulants, should use kappa.
                    It would be better to use some formula (in that 
paper) to demonstrate why Kn+1/Kn is negative when first order phase 
transition or bi-model is present.
                     In this slide you may demonstrate how -15 is 
obtained and the values of K5 and K6 are obtained, as you will use it to 
compare with data in your later plot.

    3. Slide 9 and 10, since we are presenting BES data, You may use 
centrality and efficiency plot in the long paper for all energies and 
give the reference.
        not only show the results from 54.4 GeV.


    4. Slide 12, Show deviation ->deviates from zero with less than 2 
sigma.

    5. Slide 14, You may mention, only statistical errors are shown in 
right plot.   K2/K1 of 7.7 GeV is published in long paper and should 
keep the same as in the right plot.


Thank you,
Best Regards,
Xiaofeng

On 2021/3/9 00:08, apandav via Star-cf-l wrote:
> Dear Conveners and all,
>
> Please find my CPOD slides on the link below.
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/CPOD_2021_e0_0.pdf
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> The figures for Preliminary request can be found on the link.
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/blog/apandav/preliminaryforcpod2021
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> Kindly let me know your comments and suggestions.
>
> Thanking you,
> Best regards,
> Ashish
>
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