STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk <hanna.zbroszczyk AT pw.edu.pl>]

Dear Moe,

Please find below my comments to your nice presentation:

Slide 3: remove one question mark from the title

The HBT method from astronomy was an inspiration to use a different method for two-particle correlations.

It would be good to underline these methods are different (different scales, different measured quantities, different determined quantities). 

I don’t understand the plot here: do you refer to astronomy or (heavy) ion collisions?

It would be better to concentrate on case you study: you have a source that emits particles. 

Detector registers particles momenta (having just two: p1 and p2 would be enough).  

Regarding the plot: R is a radius, you plotted as diameter. 

Instead you third bullet you can add that femtoscopic correlations arise due to quantum statistics effects and Final State Interactions (if present).

Slide 4: Many hyperon -> may hyperon

Slide 5: dE/dx ,Reconstruct -> dE/dx, reconstruct

Slide 6: 2014(1 billion..) -> 2014 (1 billion..) (add space)

Mass(from.. -> Mass (from.. (add space)

Slide 7: Theory equation: q -> q_{inv} (as you mention C_2(q_{inv}))

It would be good to add that usually this equation is used to parametrize correlation function including quantum statistics (only)

Slide 8: in previous slide you use q, here you use Q, please make them consistent

Slide 10: define \Delta \Eta

Slide 14: Separate title: \Delta\phi vs \delta\Eta (add two spaces: before and after vs) 

Best regards,

Hanna

Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk

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Wiadomość napisana przez Xiaofeng Luo via Star-cf-l <star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov> w dniu 09.03.2021, o godz. 17:27:

Hi Moe,

    Very nice presentation.
    Please add "for the STAR Collaboration" in the first page.
    I sign off.

Thank you,
Best Regards,
Xiaofeng

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