STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk <hanna.zbroszczyk AT pw.edu.pl>]

Hi Risa,

Please find below my minor comments to your nice presentation:

Slide 8: increase the font size for equations for efficiency correction

Slide 12: the legend (shown in the first plot) referring to p+p and Au+Au collisions is very pale. Make the triangle more visible and the circle consistent with symbols indicating p+p data (colors).

With those implemented, I sign off.

Thanks,

Hanna

Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk

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Wiadomość napisana przez Xiaofeng Luo via Star-cf-l <star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov> w dniu 07.03.2021, o godz. 15:51:

Hi Risa,

    Very nice presentation.

    Slide 1, add "for the STAR Collaboration"

    Slide 2, Y. Aoki -> Y. Aoki, et al.

    Slide 3,  I suggest to mention X, Y should be independent variable for the additive relation.
                  And Skellam = Possion - Poission'  should be also independent Poission.


    Slide 4, the STAR PRL paper is published online already, please put journal # :
                STAR Collaboration, Phys. Rev. Lett. 126, 092301 (2021)
and also add long paper : STAR Collaboration, arXiv : 2101. 12413

                Possible signal from critical point -> Possible signature of critical point

    Slide 5, Title : cross over -> crossover
                Bullet 1： suggest change to :  From peripheral to central, the values of C6/C2 change from positive to negative.
                Bullet 2:  -> Lattice QCD calculations at mu_B =0 show negative C6/C2.

    Slide 7, Please define the Refmult3 and the Charge Particle Multiplicity used in slide 9, 10, 12.

    Slide 12, The left plot, 0-5% central data point is not in the center of the error band.
                   It is not clear what is the centrality for each Au+Au data points, especially right plot.
                   I suggest to put centrality percentage values close to the light blue scale.

    With those implemented, I sign off.

Thank you,
Best Regards,
Xiaofeng

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