STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[Xiaofeng Luo <xfluo.star AT hotmail.com>]

Hi Risa,

    Very nice presentation.

    Slide 1, add "for the STAR Collaboration"

    Slide 2, Y. Aoki -> Y. Aoki, et al.

    Slide 3,  I suggest to mention X, Y should be independent variable 
for the additive relation.
                  And Skellam = Possion - Poission'  should be also 
independent Poission.


    Slide 4, the STAR PRL paper is published online already, please put 
journal # :
                STAR Collaboration, Phys. Rev. Lett. 126, 092301 (2021)
and also add long paper : STAR Collaboration, arXiv : 2101. 12413

                Possible signal from critical point -> Possible 
signature of critical point

    Slide 5, Title : cross over -> crossover
                Bullet 1： suggest change to :  From peripheral to 
central, the values of C6/C2 change from positive to negative.
                Bullet 2:  -> Lattice QCD calculations at mu_B =0 show 
negative C6/C2.

    Slide 7, Please define the Refmult3 and the Charge Particle 
Multiplicity used in slide 9, 10, 12.

    Slide 12, The left plot, 0-5% central data point is not in the 
center of the error band.
                   It is not clear what is the centrality for each 
Au+Au data points, especially right plot.
                   I suggest to put centrality percentage values close 
to the light blue scale.

    With those implemented, I sign off.

Thank you,
Best Regards,
Xiaofeng

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