STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[Xiaofeng Luo <xfluo.star AT hotmail.com>]

Hi Risa,

    Very nice presentation.
    Please find my comments/suggestion below :

    1. Slide 1, add "for the STAR Collaboration"

    2. Slide 2, Y. Aoki -> Y. Aoki, et al.

    3. Slide 3,  I suggest to mention X, Y should be independent 
variable for the additive relation.
                  And Skellam = Possion - Poission'  should be also 
independent Poission.

    4. Slide 4,  Also add long paper as reference : STAR Collaboration, 
arXiv : 2101. 12413

    5. Slide 5, Bullet 1： suggest change to :  From peripheral to 
central, the values of C6/C2 change from positive to negative.
                    Bullet 2:  -> Lattice QCD calculations at mu_B =0 
show negative C6/C2.

    6. Slide 9, Protons -> Protons and Antiprotons

    7. Slide 12, May add reference for CBWC.

    9. Slide 17, please mention, only statistical errors are shown for 
Au+Au results.

    10. Backup : Too many backup slides, especially, please remove 
preliminary data that not sign off by PWG.
           Also please check this for your JPS talk.

    With those implemented, I sign off.

Thank you,
Best Regards,
Xiaofeng



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