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Re: [Star-cf-l] STAR presentation by Risa Nishitani for CPOD March Meeting 2021 submitted for review
- From: Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk <hanna.zbroszczyk AT pw.edu.pl>
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- Subject: Re: [Star-cf-l] STAR presentation by Risa Nishitani for CPOD March Meeting 2021 submitted for review
- Date: Wed, 10 Mar 2021 09:02:29 +0100
Hi Risa,
Please find below minor comments to your nice slides:
Slide 5: Increase little bit the right plot as font sizes are really tiny
Slide 11: Increase little bit font sizes for equations from the bottom of the slide
Slide 17: the legend (shown in the first plot) referring to p+p and Au+Au collisions is very pale. Make the triangle more visible and the circle consistent with symbols indicating p+p data (colors).
With those implemented, I sign off.
Thanks,
Hanna
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Wiadomość napisana przez Xiaofeng Luo via Star-cf-l <star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov> w dniu 07.03.2021, o godz. 16:19:Hi Risa,
Very nice presentation.
Please find my comments/suggestion below :
1. Slide 1, add "for the STAR Collaboration"
2. Slide 2, Y. Aoki -> Y. Aoki, et al.
3. Slide 3, I suggest to mention X, Y should be independent variable for the additive relation.
And Skellam = Possion - Poission' should be also independent Poission.
4. Slide 4, Also add long paper as reference : STAR Collaboration, arXiv : 2101. 12413
5. Slide 5, Bullet 1: suggest change to : From peripheral to central, the values of C6/C2 change from positive to negative.
Bullet 2: -> Lattice QCD calculations at mu_B =0 show negative C6/C2.
6. Slide 9, Protons -> Protons and Antiprotons
7. Slide 12, May add reference for CBWC.
9. Slide 17, please mention, only statistical errors are shown for Au+Au results.
10. Backup : Too many backup slides, especially, please remove preliminary data that not sign off by PWG.
Also please check this for your JPS talk.
With those implemented, I sign off.
Thank you,
Best Regards,
Xiaofeng
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[Star-cf-l] STAR presentation by Risa Nishitani for CPOD March Meeting 2021 submitted for review,
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Re: [Star-cf-l] STAR presentation by Risa Nishitani for CPOD March Meeting 2021 submitted for review,
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Re: [Star-cf-l] STAR presentation by Risa Nishitani for CPOD March Meeting 2021 submitted for review,
Xiaofeng Luo, 03/07/2021
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