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  • From: Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk <hanna.zbroszczyk AT pw.edu.pl>
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  • Subject: Re: [Star-cf-l] STAR presentation by Risa Nishitani for CPOD March Meeting 2021 submitted for review
  • Date: Wed, 10 Mar 2021 09:02:29 +0100

Hi Risa,

Please find below minor comments to your nice slides:

Slide 5: Increase little bit the right plot as font sizes are really tiny

Slide 11: Increase little bit font sizes for equations from the bottom of the slide

Slide 17: the legend (shown in the first plot) referring to p+p and Au+Au collisions is very pale. Make the triangle more visible and the circle consistent with symbols indicating p+p data (colors).

With those implemented, I sign off.

Thanks,
Hanna

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Wiadomość napisana przez Xiaofeng Luo via Star-cf-l <star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov> w dniu 07.03.2021, o godz. 16:19:

Hi Risa,

    Very nice presentation.
    Please find my comments/suggestion below :

    1. Slide 1, add "for the STAR Collaboration"

    2. Slide 2, Y. Aoki -> Y. Aoki, et al.

    3. Slide 3,  I suggest to mention X, Y should be independent variable for the additive relation.
                  And Skellam = Possion - Poission'  should be also independent Poission.

    4. Slide 4,  Also add long paper as reference : STAR Collaboration, arXiv : 2101. 12413

    5. Slide 5, Bullet 1: suggest change to :  From peripheral to central, the values of C6/C2 change from positive to negative.
                    Bullet 2:  -> Lattice QCD calculations at mu_B =0 show negative C6/C2.

    6. Slide 9, Protons -> Protons and Antiprotons

    7. Slide 12, May add reference for CBWC.

    9. Slide 17, please mention, only statistical errors are shown for Au+Au results.

    10. Backup : Too many backup slides, especially, please remove preliminary data that not sign off by PWG.
           Also please check this for your JPS talk.

    With those implemented, I sign off.

Thank you,
Best Regards,
Xiaofeng



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