STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[Xiaofeng Luo <xfluo.star AT hotmail.com>]

Hi Ashish,

    Nice proceedings,
    Please find my suggestions below :

    1. TPC (Time Projection Chamber) ->
Time Projection Chamber (TPC) , TOF (Time of Flight) -> Time of Flight (TOF)

    2.  legend in Fig.2 and 3, New measurement -> 27 GeV (BES-II)

    3. Reference, arXiv: 2001.02852, it is published, please use formal 
PRL journal number. And also please add net-proton long paper arXiv number.
        Add reference for track-by-track efficiency correction : PRC 
99, 044917 (2019)

    4. In somewhere add the year 2018 for this new 27 GeV data taken.

    5. Abstract and summary: first measurement -> measurement

   With those implemented, I sign off.

Thank you,
Best Regards,
Xiaofeng

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