STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk <hanna.zbroszczyk AT pw.edu.pl>]

Dear Yu,

Please find below my comments to your nice proceedings:

General comment: put p+p and Au+Au collisions in the math mode: p-p -> $p-p$, Au-Au -> $Au-Au$

Line 6: Lattice -> Lattice QCD

Line 10: Study -> Studying

Line 12: display -> discuss / explore ..

Line 15: add a reference

Line 15: Thermodynamically then -> Thermodynamically,

Line 16: remove usually

Line 24: Remove And

Line 29: shows -> discusses

Line 29: Put N in the math mode (or italic)

Line 32: 7.7-200 -> 7.7 - 200

Line 32: Anti(Protons) -> Protons and antiprotons

Linę 33: detector -> detectors

Figure 1 description: 7.7-200 -> 7.7 - 200

Line 47: 7.7-200 -> 7.7 - 200

Figure 2 description: 7.7-200 -> 7.7 - 200

With those implemented I sign off.

Thanks,

Hanna

Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk

PhD DSc Eng, Professor WUT

E-mail: hanna.zbroszczyk AT pw.edu.pl

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