STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[Xiaofeng Luo <xfluo.star AT hotmail.com>]

Hi Yu,

    Nice proceedings.
    Please find my comments below :

    1.  Line 6, in this talk -> in this paper
    2.  Line 15, various theory study -> various QCD-based model studies
         and add reference after first order phase transition.
    3.  Line 16, usually called -> called.
    4.  Line 21, 1th-order -> first order
    5.  Line 22-23,  add reference after "of the system" and delete 
'and they have been studied extensively both in experiments and theories'
    6.  Line 23, "It is predicted…" -> It is predicted that the 
fourth-order fluctuations will exhibit a non-monotonic
                        energy dependence trend when passing through 
the critical region. "
    7.  Line 26, "And for 5th- and 6th-order cumulants recent results 
from Lattice QCD and the functional renormalisation group approach 
(FRG)  in low energy effective theory suggests they are closely connected 
to the smooth crossover at µB = 0 MeV." -> "For 5th- and 6th-order 
cumulants recent calculations from Lattice QCD and the functional 
renormalisation group approach (FRG) show that they will can be negative 
due to the crossover transition between QGP and hadronic phase."

   8. Line 61, less than 2 sigma significance.

   9. Line 56, calculation -> calculations.

   10. Line 71, due to the phase transition -> due to crossover transition

   11. Line 75, and p+p collisions at 200 GeV.

    12.  , especially in the high baryon density region which is √s  < 
27 GeV  -> at √s = 7.7 - 62.4 GeV.


    With those implemented, I sign off.

Thank you,
Best Regards,
Xiaofeng

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