STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk <hanna.zbroszczyk AT pw.edu.pl>]

Hi Risa,

With those comments implemented I sign off. 

I don’t have further comments.

Thanks,

Hanna

Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk

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Wiadomość napisana przez Xiaofeng Luo via Star-cf-l <star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov> w dniu 03.06.2021, o godz. 17:10:

Hi Risa,

    Nice presentation.

    Please find my following comments/suggestions :

    1. Slide 4, Please confirm the 900 M events for BES-I Run 10 200 GeV.
        Is this central + minbias trigger events ?  I know that Run 10 minbias （0-80%） is about 238 M events.
        Please only put minbias events #.

    2. Slide 8, Please use the high resolution plot directly from the short paper.
                    The bottom right , the cut off reference should be removed. Add long paper arXiv reference into this slide.

    3.  Slide 11, please add the year that the data is taken. Please double check the statistics you put into the table.

    4. Slide 13, Please replace "arXiv link will be inserted QM2019 T. Nonaka"  with "STAR, arXiv : 2105.14698 ".

    5. Slide 14, as per STAR policy, please remove "CPOD2021 A. Pandav sQM2021 Y. Zhang" , because you are representing the STAR Collaboration in this presentation.

    6, Slide 15-20, remove "CPOD2021 R. Nishitani" from the plot.

    With those implemented, I sign off.

Thank you,
Best Regards,
Xiaofeng

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