STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[Risa Nishitani <s2312412 AT gmail.com>]

Dear Xiaofeng,

Thank you for your comments. I have fixed and uploaded them.

I’m sorry for the late reply.

Best regards,

Risa

2021年6月4日(金) 0:11 Xiaofeng Luo via Star-cf-l <star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov>:

Hi Risa,

     Nice presentation.

     Please find my following comments/suggestions :

     1. Slide 4, Please confirm the 900 M events for BES-I Run 10 200 GeV.
         Is this central + minbias trigger events ?  I know that Run 10
minbias （0-80%） is about 238 M events.
         Please only put minbias events #.

     2. Slide 8, Please use the high resolution plot directly from the
short paper.
                     The bottom right , the cut off reference should be
removed. Add long paper arXiv reference into this slide.

     3.  Slide 11, please add the year that the data is taken. Please
double check the statistics you put into the table.

     4. Slide 13, Please replace "arXiv link will be inserted QM2019 T.
Nonaka"  with "STAR, arXiv : 2105.14698 ".

     5. Slide 14, as per STAR policy, please remove "CPOD2021 A. Pandav
sQM2021 Y. Zhang" , because you are representing the STAR Collaboration
in this presentation.

     6, Slide 15-20, remove "CPOD2021 R. Nishitani" from the plot.

     With those implemented, I sign off.

Thank you,
Best Regards,
Xiaofeng

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