STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[Xiaofeng Luo <xfluo.star AT hotmail.com>]

Hi Jin,

    Nice presentation.
    Please find my suggestions below :

    1. Slide 3,  Title : Phase Diagram of QCD -> QCD Phase Diagram
                      arXiv: 2001. 02852  -> Maybe change to another 
reference.

    2. Slide 4, I suggest to remove this slide, as it is not quit 
related to your analysis

    3. Slide 8, I suggest to put this slide into backup or 
replace/remove the right figures
                    As we haven't discussed the experimental results 
yet, which will be discussed later.
                    Thus showing experimental results here maybe not 
appropriate.

    With those implemented, I sign off.

Thank you,
Best Regards,
Xiaofeng


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