STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

["JinWu" <wj2016113394 AT mails.ccnu.edu.cn>]

Hi Xiaofeng,

Thank you for the nice suggestions. I have implemented those in the updated version below: https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/Intermittency-ISMD2021-STAR.pdf

Thank you,
Best Regards,

Jin

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From:  "Xiaofeng Luo via Star-cf-l"<star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov>;

Date:  Thu, Jul 8, 2021 11:28 AM

To:  "STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG"<star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov>;

Subject:  Re: [Star-cf-l] STAR presentation by Jin Wu for ISMD2021 submitted for review

 

Hi Jin,

     Nice presentation.
     Please find my suggestions below :

     1. Slide 3,  Title : Phase Diagram of QCD -> QCD Phase Diagram
                       arXiv: 2001. 02852  -> Maybe change to another
reference.

     2. Slide 4, I suggest to remove this slide, as it is not quit
related to your analysis

     3. Slide 8, I suggest to put this slide into backup or
replace/remove the right figures
                     As we haven't discussed the experimental results
yet, which will be discussed later.
                     Thus showing experimental results here maybe not
appropriate.

     With those implemented, I sign off.

Thank you,
Best Regards,
Xiaofeng


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