STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[Xiaofeng Luo <xfluo.star AT hotmail.com>]

Hi Moe,

    Nice proceedings.
    Please find my minor suggestions below :

    1. Line 37,  Please define the abbreviation : TPC and TOF

    2. You may move the citation in the Equ.2 to the text. Not put into 
the equation.

    3. Please define k* and Qinv mathematically. As they are both used 
in the paper and Figures.

    4. For p-Xi results, you may cite Ke Mi's APS presentation :
        K. Mi et al. [STAR], talk presented at APS April Meeting 2021, 
L13.00007 (2021)

    With those implemented, I sign off.

Thank you,
Best Regards,
Xiaofeng

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