STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[apandav <apandav AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Dear Hanna,

Many thanks for the comments and suggestions.
The suggested changes are incorporated and the updated draft can be 
found on the link below.
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/pos_CPOD_C56_pa_e2.pdf

Both old and new draft can be found on the below link:
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/56233

Thanks,
Best regards,
Ashish


On 2021-09-08 16:31, Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk via Star-cf-l wrote:
> Dear Ashish,
>
> Please find below comments to your nice proceedings:
>
> Abstract:
> crossover -> cross-over
> first order -> first-order
> Two-component -> two-component (twice), and the line 28, 98
> This sentence: "The protons and antiprotons are selected at
> mid-rapidity |y| < 0.5 within 0.4 < pT < 2.0 GeV/c.” I propose to
> move to the Analysis Details section (to remove from the Abstract)
>
> Introduction:
> Line 7: atleast -> at least
> Line 10: crossover -> cross-over (the same in the line 12, 19, 81)
> Line 14: first order -> first-order (the same in the line 27, 28)
> Line 23: feild-> field
> Line 36: define % of the centrality
>
> Analysis details:
> Line 52: energies: 7.7, .. -> energies: \sqrt{s_{NN}} = 7.7, ..
> Linw 60: 2.0GeV -> 2.0 GeV
>
> With those implemented, I sign off.
>
> Thanks,
> Hanna
>
> Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk
> PhD DSc Eng, Professor WUT
>
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> > Ashish Pandav (apandav10 AT gmail.com) has submitted a material for a
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