STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[Xiaofeng Luo <xfluo.star AT hotmail.com>]

Hi Debasish,

    Nice abstract.
    Please find my comments and suggestions below for you to consider :

    1. Line 9-10, I suggest to change to : "In addition, they are also 
sensitive to local baryon density fluctuations indued by QCD phase 
transition."

    2.   Line 11， first systematic measurement -> first measurement

    3.  Line 16,  I suggest to delete " using Time Projection Chamber 
(TPC) and Time-of-Flight detectors."

    4.  Line 19 : I suggest to delete "that incorporates 19 the 
coalescence of nucleons close-by in space and momentum to form deuterons."

    With those implemented, I sign off.

Thank you,
Best Regards,
Xiaofeng

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