STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

["Yu Zhang" <zhang_yu AT mails.ccnu.edu.cn>]

Dear Xiaofeng,

Thank you very much for your comments.

I've implemented them accordingly.

https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/58678

Thanks and regards,

Yu

 

 

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From:  "STAR Correlations and Fluctuatio"<star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov>;

Date:  Thu, Mar 31, 2022 06:02 PM

To:  "STAR Correlations and Fluctuatio"<star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov>;

Subject:  Re: [Star-cf-l] STAR presentation by Yu Zhang for Quark Matter 2022 submitted for review

 

Hi  Yu,

     Nice presentation.
     Please find my suggestions below :
     1. Slide 8, the last correction is just for testing and not applied
in the data analysis
                     we may remove it from this page to avoid confusion.

     2.Slide 11, the title of X-axis of left figure is not consistent
with the ones in the other figures, e.g., figure in slide 12.
                        Please make it consistent.

     3. Slide 12, please modify the last bullet to : This correction
strongly depends on Npart fluctuation from models，thus it is not       
used in the STAR data analysis

     4. When you discuss slide 9, you may emphasize why the pile-up
effect could be large in fixed-target experiment, and
         the necessary to use the pile-up correction in this analysis.
Because  we didn't apply this in collider mode data.

     5. Slide 17, 10 times -> 10-20 times

     6. In the bottom of slide 17, you may add red or blue text : "Stay
tuned for the exciting results from RHIC BES-II."

     With those implemented, I sign off.

Thank you,
Best Regards,
Xiaofeng


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