STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[Xiaofeng Luo <xfluo.star AT hotmail.com>]

Hi  Yu,

    Nice presentation.
    Please find my suggestions below :
    1. Slide 8, the last correction is just for testing and not applied 
in the data analysis
                    we may remove it from this page to avoid confusion.

    2.Slide 11, the title of X-axis of left figure is not consistent 
with the ones in the other figures, e.g., figure in slide 12.
                       Please make it consistent.

    3. Slide 12, please modify the last bullet to : This correction 
strongly depends on Npart fluctuation from models，thus it is not        
used in the STAR data analysis

    4. When you discuss slide 9, you may emphasize why the pile-up 
effect could be large in fixed-target experiment, and
        the necessary to use the pile-up correction in this analysis. 
Because  we didn't apply this in collider mode data.

    5. Slide 17, 10 times -> 10-20 times

    6. In the bottom of slide 17, you may add red or blue text : "Stay 
tuned for the exciting results from RHIC BES-II."

    With those implemented, I sign off.

Thank you,
Best Regards,
Xiaofeng


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