STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

["JinWu" <wj2016113394 AT mails.ccnu.edu.cn>]

Hi Xin,

 Thank you for nice suggestions today. I updated the poster at link: https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/58816.

1) As you suggest, for beta_q vs. q figure, I move it to slide 4 and make the plot in multiple panels for various energies.

2) Done. I have enlarged two figures a bit and made the summary more concise.

Thanks,

Best regards,

Jin  

 

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Date:  Thu, Mar 31, 2022 05:30 AM

To:  "star-cf-l"<star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov>;

Subject:  [Star-cf-l] STAR presentation by Jin Wu for Quark Matter 2022 got commented by Xin Dong

 

Dear star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,

Xin Dong ( xdong AT lbl.gov ) has commented on a material originally submitted 
by Jin Wu ( wj2016113394 AT mails.ccnu.edu.cn ) at
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/Quark-Matter-2022/Measurement-Intermittency-Charged-Particles-Au-Au-Collisions-sqrts-0

Comment:
Hi Jin,
Thank you for addressing my comments and answering my questions. I only have 
a couple of more suggestions to the newly added beta_q vs. q figure.
1) It will be better to make the plot in a linear scale and not apply many 
folds of scaling factors. You want to reveal the power law dependence, but 
currently it is hard to see any dependence. You may just add a shift to 
different energies or make the plot in multiple panels.Â
2) If you prefer to leave the figure on Slide 5, the last statement on Slide 
4 should be attached here.
3) Slide 5, It will be better to enlarge these figures a bit more so they are 
more readable, while you may move down the texts a bit and make them more 
concise, for example     " Scaling exponent vs. collision energy:  
 non-monotonic behavior in central collisions / flat distribution for 30-40% 
centrality collisions.       Scaling exponent vs. centrality:    
decrease from mid-central to central collisions.       Model studies / 
theory input to understand the baseline and the observed energy/centrality 
dependence."
Thank you and Best Regards
/xin

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