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Re: [Star-cf-l] DNP Abstract

From: Takafumi Niida <niida AT bnl.gov>
To: "Ball Cap, Jonathan Gonzalo" <jballcap AT Central.UH.EDU>, STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG <star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
Subject: Re: [Star-cf-l] DNP Abstract
Date: Fri, 1 Jul 2022 10:37:31 +0200

Dear Jonathan,

Since the submission deadline is approaching, I am sending my minor comments here to your nice abstract.

l.6: the first BES -> the BES-I

l.10: “We present, “ <- remove the comma

l.12: analyze -> study

I sign off with these implemented. Please consider conveners’ comments if any.

Best regards,

Takafumi

On Jun 30, 2022, at 15:28, Ball Cap, Jonathan Gonzalo via Star-cf-l <star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Dear Hanna and Xiaofeng,

I submitted an abstract to drupal some days ago, the abstract is similar to the one sent for SQM. If you could comment my abstract, it would be greatly appreciated, you can find my abstract in the following link. Thank you in advance.

https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/60096

Best regards,
Jonathan Ball

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Re: [Star-cf-l] DNP Abstract, Takafumi Niida, 07/01/2022
- Re: [Star-cf-l] DNP Abstract, Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk, 07/01/2022
  - Re: [Star-cf-l] DNP Abstract, Ball Cap, Jonathan Gonzalo, 07/01/2022
- Re: [Star-cf-l] DNP Abstract, Ball Cap, Jonathan Gonzalo, 07/01/2022
  - Re: [Star-cf-l] DNP Abstract, Xiaofeng Luo, 07/01/2022