STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk <hanna.zbroszczyk AT pw.edu.pl>]

Dear Jonathan,

With Xiaofeng’s and takafumi’s  comments implemented, I sigh off.

Thanks,

Hanna

Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk

PhD DSc Eng, Professor WUT

E-mail: hanna.zbroszczyk AT pw.edu.pl

Tel: +48 22 234 5851 (office)

Address:

Warsaw University of Technology

Faculty of Physics

Nuclear Physics Division

Koszykowa 75

Office: 117b (via 115)

00-662 Warsaw, Poland

Wiadomość napisana przez Takafumi Niida via Star-cf-l <star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov> w dniu 01.07.2022, o godz. 10:37:

Dear Jonathan,

Since the submission deadline is approaching, I am sending my minor comments here to your nice abstract.

l.6: the first BES -> the BES-I

l.10: “We present, “ <- remove the comma

l.12: analyze -> study

I sign off with these implemented. Please consider conveners’ comments if any.

Best regards,

Takafumi

On Jun 30, 2022, at 15:28, Ball Cap, Jonathan Gonzalo via Star-cf-l <star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Dear Hanna and Xiaofeng, 

I submitted an abstract to drupal some days ago, the abstract is similar to the one sent for SQM. If you could comment my abstract, it would be greatly appreciated, you can find my abstract in the following link. Thank you in advance. 

https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/60096

Best regards, 

Jonathan Ball 

_______________________________________________
Star-cf-l mailing list
Star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov
https://lists.bnl.gov/mailman/listinfo/star-cf-l

_______________________________________________
Star-cf-l mailing list
Star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov
https://lists.bnl.gov/mailman/listinfo/star-cf-l