STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[Xiaofeng Luo <xfluo.star AT hotmail.com>]

Hi Yu,

    Nice proceedings.
    Please find my suggestion below :

    1. Line 11-13, I think those details can be discussed in the 
section III, the analysis details. Please remove it from abstract.
        In addition, in the end of the abstract please put some 
important conclusions made from our PRL paper.
        such as hadronic dominated and if CP exist...., as you stated 
in the summary.

    2. Line 10, FXT -> Fixed-target (FXT).

    3.Line 35, This paper will report  -> This proceedings reports

    4. In the summary, you may add several sentence for outlook about 
coming BES-II results.

    With those implemented, I sign off.

Thank you,
Best Regards,
Xiaofeng

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