STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

["Yu Zhang" <zhang_yu AT mails.ccnu.edu.cn>]

Dear Hanna and Xiaofeng,

Thank you very much for you detailed comments.

I have implemented them in the same link.

https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/60342

Best regards,

Yu

 

 

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From:  "Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk via Star-cf-l"<star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov>;

Date:  Mon, Jul 25, 2022 00:14 AM

To:  "star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov"<star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov>;

Subject:  Re: [Star-cf-l] STAR presentation by Yu Zhang for Quark Matter 2022 submitted for review

 

Dear Yu,

I have minor comments regarding your nice proceedings,

With those implemented, I sign off.

Line 9: this proceedings -> these proceedings

Line 10 and also other lines when you mention fixed-target data: FXT -> Fixed-target (FXT); and then you are free to use already defined abbreviation. If you don’t want to define the abbreviation FXT, please use full name fixed-target

Line 34: below 7.7 GeV -> below \sqrt{s_{NN}} = 7.7 GeV

Line 40: at 3 GeV -> at \sqrt{s_{NN}} = 3 GeV

Line 72: at 3 GeV -> at \sqrt{s_{NN}} = 3 GeV

Increase please the size of the Figure1. Font’s are really tiny. You can put the figure as wide as the width of the page is.

Line 81: The 3 GeV ->  \sqrt{s_{NN}} = 3 GeV

Linę 98: around 20 GeV -> around \sqrt{s_{NN}} = 20 GeV

Linę 120: 3 GeV -> \sqrt{s_{NN}} =. 3 GeV

Thanks,

Hanna

Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk

PhD DSc Eng, Professor WUT

E-mail: hanna.zbroszczyk AT pw.edu.pl

Tel: +48 22 234 5851 (office)

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Wiadomość napisana przez Xiaofeng Luo via Star-cf-l <star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov> w dniu 24.07.2022, o godz. 03:11:

Hi Yu,

    Nice proceedings.
    Please find my suggestion below :

    1. Line 11-13, I think those details can be discussed in the section III, the analysis details. Please remove it from abstract.
        In addition, in the end of the abstract please put some important conclusions made from our PRL paper.
        such as hadronic dominated and if CP exist...., as you stated in the summary.

    2. Line 10, FXT -> Fixed-target (FXT).

    3.Line 35, This paper will report  -> This proceedings reports

    4. In the summary, you may add several sentence for outlook about coming BES-II results.

    With those implemented, I sign off.

Thank you,
Best Regards,
Xiaofeng

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