STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk <hanna.zbroszczyk AT pw.edu.pl>]

Dear Ho San,

Please find my comments to your nice proceedings:

Line 18: paper -> proceedings

Line 29: zero ->vanishing

Line 69 and the following: can you please describe more motivation why you study higher-order cumulants in isobar data?

You mention mostly the reason of high statistics. It would be nice to have stronger motivation reason. 

Linę 74: remove the space after Ru

Line 83: it should not start with )

Summary and outlook: the last paragraph about CME and reasons to study isobar data should be moved to the motivation part. Please consider.

Thanks,

Hanna

Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk

PhD DSc Eng, Professor WUT

E-mail: hanna.zbroszczyk AT pw.edu.pl

Tel: +48 22 234 5851 (office)

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Warsaw University of Technology

Faculty of Physics

Nuclear Physics Division

Koszykowa 75

Office: 117b (via 115)

00-662 Warsaw, Poland

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