STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[Xiaofeng Luo <xfluo.star AT hotmail.com>]

    Hi Zach,
      
          Please find my comments/suggestions to your DNP slides : 
      
          1. Title -> Prospects on Proton Cumulant Analysis at the
      STAR Fixed-Target Program 
              In your slides, you may add a slide to discuss the QCD
      phase diagram and motivation of STAR Beam Energy Scan program.
      
          2. Slide 2, the reference below the plot : STAR,   Phys. Rev.
      Lett. 128, 202303 (2022) ;  arXiv : 2209.11940. 
                                                                        
                 Phys. Rev. Lett.
        126, 092301 (2021);  Phys. Rev. C 104, 024902 (2021). 
      
        3. BES-I data showed possible evidence of fluctuations ->
    Non-monotonic energy dependence was observed in BES-I data with a
    3.1 sigma significance.
            High-statistics data  with detector improvements have been
    taken from 7.7 GeV to 27 GeV.-> High-statistics data (BES-II
    collider mode) with detector improvements have been
            taken from 7.7 GeV to 27 GeV. I think you may add a table or
    figure to demonstrate the stataticics of those BES-II data. Not only
    show FIX data.
    
        4. Slide 3, You should have a better figure to demonstrate the
    Fixed target program at STAR.  and in somewhere to show the muB
    coverage of FXT program.
       
        5. After slide 4, you may discuss ETOF detector in detail before
    showing the acceptance plot in next slide.
    
        6. Slide 6, Move after slide 4, but not showing the efficiency
    and PID plot. I think we are not ready to show those plots without
    proper calibrations.
          
        7. Slide 7, the title of this slide is covered by STAR logo.
       
        8. Slide 8, It is not clear to me how the right plot is produced
    and what does it mean. I suggest not to show this plot before it was
    discussed in PWG and focusing groups.
       
         9. Slide 9, Summary : A main objective of the STAR Fixed-Target
    Program->  "A main objective of the BES-II (Both collider and FIX
    target) program"
                         Third item : at low energies->at low
    energies (3 - 7.7 GeV).
                         Fourth item : 8 new data points -> More data
    points 
    
            With those implemented, I sign off. 
    
    Thank you,      
    Best Regards,
    Xiaofeng

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