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[Star-cf-l] STAR presentation by Zachary Sweger for Rencontres de Moriond got commented by Toshihiro Nonaka

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Subject: [Star-cf-l] STAR presentation by Zachary Sweger for Rencontres de Moriond got commented by Toshihiro Nonaka
Date: Wed, 25 Jan 2023 05:55:10 -0500

Dear star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,

Toshihiro Nonaka ( tnonaka AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov ) has commented on a material
originally submitted by Zachary Sweger ( zwsweger AT ucdavis.edu ) at
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/Rencontres-de-Moriond/Recent-and-Future-Results-STAR-Beam-Energy-Scan

Comment:
Hi Zach, I have a few minor comments for your nice abstract:

Title: âFuture Resultsâ sounds strange, so I would change it to âRecent

Results and Future Prospects for the Beam Energy Scan at RHICâ or something

like that.

L1: STAR Experiment -> STAR experiment

L5: 54.0 -> 54.4

With these implemented, I sign-off.

Best regards,
Toshihiro

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