STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[Zachary Sweger <zwsweger AT ucdavis.edu>]

Dear Toshihiro,

Thank you for your comments. The abstract has been updated and can be found at: https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/Moriond_Abstract_v2.pdf

Best,

Zach

On Wed, Jan 25, 2023 at 2:56 AM webmaster--- via Star-cf-l <star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Dear star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,

Toshihiro Nonaka ( tnonaka AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov ) has commented on a material 
originally submitted by Zachary Sweger ( zwsweger AT ucdavis.edu ) at
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/Rencontres-de-Moriond/Recent-and-Future-Results-STAR-Beam-Energy-Scan

Comment:
Hi Zach, I have a few minor comments for your nice abstract:

Title: “Future Results” sounds strange, so I would change it to “Recent 
Results and Future Prospects for the Beam Energy Scan at RHIC” or something 
like that.

L1: STAR Experiment -> STAR experiment

L5: 54.0 -> 54.4

With these implemented, I sign-off.

Best regards,
Toshihiro

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